Response to audience feedback

After reading the audience feedback I realised there are a number of changes I must make to each element of my magazine. The front cover needs drastically changing. the image does not link to the other two images and overall it does not look as professional as I would like it to look. I am going to use my first draft design contents page as opposed to my initial 'final draft'. According to the audience feedback, this design was better than my other drafts. In regards to the double page spread, I need to move the text to avoid text being lost when folded into the double page spread. :)