Wednesday 13 April 2011

Evaluation.

Evaluation.

Within this essay I am going to do an evaluation of my music magazine coursework; the front cover, contents page and double page spread. This is the brief we were given; main task: the front page, contents and double page spread of a new music magazine. All images and text used must be original, produced by you – minimum of four images

My magazine was designed to keep in keys with certain generic conventions of  a music magazine such as the masthead, banner line etc. appearing in the expected positions of the front cover but also to challenge others aspects. My intention for the magazine was to be individualistic and aesthetically pleasing for the reader especially in regards to the front cover as this would be the first thing a possible buyer would see. I intended the front cover to contain bold, block colours and for the font styles to be unique and eye catching. For the contents page, I followed a similar layout to that of Kerrang magazine because it was simple and effective. The image being used as the divider on the contents page enables to reader to digest all the information on the page with ease. The double page spread met with the generic conventions of a double page spread. This is because half the page was devoted to an image of Katy K, the other half to the interview I devised.

My media product aims to represent my social group (C2 D E) by having a model on the front cover who represents that social group. For my magazine the social grouping it was aimed at was students from a C2 D E socio-economic background. I believe my model echoed such a grouping as she was dressed in a similar way to people of that background dress. The model is not wearing designer brand rather simple, fashionable high street clothing. I made the magazine of reasonable pricing (£2.99) meaning those from such a background can afford it. The fact it is a lower priced magazine means it could be issued as a weekly magazine. However due to the contents of the magazine it would be more effective sold as a bi-weekly magazine. This would mean that more people would buy it more regularly because of the fact they could save up to buy the magazine. A magazine of £2.99 will be of good quality paper and full of quality stories and images.  Also the stories featured are ones in which the social group would be interested in. All images used in the magazine where of young people of a similar age to that of the intended target audience. This creates familiarity between the reader and the magazine as the reader can relate to the featured artist.

I believe an institution such as Bauer would distribute my product. This is because Bauer distribute Kerrang!, Empire, Kiss and Q. These magazines hold similar ideologies and values to that of my product as both aim to be individualistic and contain alternative music within them. The above magazines have similar target audiences to that of my magazine Download and they all fall within the same price range. Bauer would be able to provide the necessary advertising within the magazine for certain products to enable the magazine to really take off and be successful.

The audience for my media product would be students from a C2, D, E background and I believe this intention is echoed in the use of the images and stories featured. I choose such an audience because that audience is the greatest majority that would buy such a magazine. Also it is a similar background to my own meaning it would be easier for me to create a product that appeals to them because I know what such an audience may desire. After looking at the reader profiles of other magazines such as NME and Q, both existing indie magazines, I realised that the readership profiles show they have a greater male audience than female. It is for this reason that I decided to make my magazine conform  to existing magazines and follow their conventions. On the front cover of my magazine I included all the necessary elements needed on a front cover such as banner headline, price, barcode etc. I ensured there was a house style which was evident throughout the 3 pages. The idea of a house style is a generic convention of music magazines. For the contents page I tried to move away from the conventional layout of a music magazine. I chose the layout I did because it was clear and looked professional. It adhered to the house style of the magazine. The double page spread was initially intended to be an introduction to the actual article. By this I mean that the image was intended to take up the majority of the page with a small amount of text on it. However it was easier to divide the page into two section, the first side being devoted to the image, the second to the article. This layout is generic with music magazines.

Through the images I used, the house style of the magazine and the stories featured I believe I attracted the desired audience. The price of the magazine is relatively cheap meaning this became another factor that would attract the desired audience. The house style of the magazine is bold block colours echoing the style of NME magazine. This magazine has a similar audience to my intended audience meaning that  wherever possible I aimed to follow their codes and conventions. This would ensure that my magazine would appeal to the target audience.

During the process of making this magazine, I have developed my skills of working with Photoshop editing software. I have learnt how to successfully manipulate images in order to create the desired affects as well as placing a certain image on a different background and still make it look as if this was the original background. I have learnt how to place text and other images on top of an initial background image creating the required magazine effect. Some issues occurred when using masking in order to manipulate one element without other elements being affected. Initially I struggled to isolate an element of a photo for example the model herself in order to manipulate the background but through practise I over came this error. Overall using Photoshop made my work look more professional which was the desired result. To present my work I used Blogger. Blogger was designed to post images, text etc. onto the site. Because of this we found it a useful tool for presenting our work. The only issue I found with this was that once you posted an entry you couldn’t move that post around. For example if I posted an entry about pricing but forgot to post an entry about readership figures, I could not post the latter in isolation, rather include it in another relevant entry. To take my original images, I used a Fuji Film digital camera. Using a professional digital camera enabled me to take good quality photos and also adjust the colouring and lighting on the camera itself. Also using a good quality camera meant I had to do minimal manipulation to the image in regards to the quality of the photo.

I believe I have been able to manipulate images using more successfully since I created my initial college magazine. The product looks more professional and looks as though it could be published in store. The contents of the various elements are also more professional as they adhere to the conventions of existing magazines such as Kerrang! and Q. I have grasped a better concept of the 5 elements each magazine engages with. These are the language, institution, ideologies, audience and representations. Having bettered my knowledge of these key concept, with my final product I was able to relate these to my magazine in order to make it more appealing to the audience and also look more professional.

Changes made to each product.

In response to my audience feedback the above is the changes I made to my front cover. I believe this new cover adheres more to the conventions of an Indie music magazine. It looks overall more professional and the house style is more effective here as it is bold and engaging.


My audience feedback showed me that out of the 3 drafts and the 'final' copy of my contents page, it was my initial draft people liked more than the 'final' copy that I has made. It is for this reason that I made a few minor alterations to my contents page and have decided to use this as my final product.




My audience feedback to my double page spread was overall positive. The only issue really address was the fact that the text would be scwed by the fold in the double page spread. This meant I had to rearrage the collums for the article as well as the blurb for the story. I added a call out from the article as a focus point for this page.

Response to audience feedback

After reading the audience feedback I realised there are a number of changes I must make to each element of my magazine. The front cover needs drastically changing. the image does not link to the other two images and overall it does not look as professional as I would like it to look. I am going to use my first draft design contents page as opposed to my initial 'final draft'. According to the audience feedback, this design was better than my other drafts. In regards to the double page spread, I need to move the text to avoid text being lost when folded into the double page spread. :)

Audience Feedback

Audience Feedback on my Front cover, Contents page and Double Page Spread.

1.      Front cover – I really like the layout. It’s simple yet effective. The fact the model is making eye contact with the audience caught my eyes. Perhaps vary the font styles used on the front cover?
Contents Page – I really like the way the page is split into two sections. The image is a bit odd though. Not sure why! I was looking through your drafts though and I really like your initial design. It’s more effective than this one I think J
Double Page Spread – LOVE IT! The font styles are really fun. Only issue is that surely if this is a double page spread then the writing in the middle of the page is going get cut in two?

2.      Front Cover – The image grabbed my attention, as did the subtitles. The title font is eye catching and reflects popular magazines. I found the white text less easy to see and therefore read. Perhaps embolden the white text or consider a different colour or font.
Contents Page – The style is completely different and I feel harsher on the eye. The images are lost in the overall effect. The text blocks at the bottom distract from the images. T different font and subheadings might be softer on the eye.
Double Page Spread – I like the overall visual effect of these pages. The image draws the reader’s eye. I feel that the use of sub headings helps the reader make choices about what to read. Although the font is quite small and would perhaps benefit from being a little larger.


3.      Front Cover – Visually, this front cover is very appealing. The image is engaging to the reader however compared with your other two images on your contents and double page spread, it doesn’t look like they all came from the same magazine.
Contents Page – The image isn’t as good as it could be. The overall effect is good but the visual effect is lost with the pictures you have chosen. Perhaps a clearer image would sort this out! I think your initial design for the contents page is better though.
Double Page Spread –I love it! Such a good effect! The fonts you have used really echo the playful style of the entire magazine. Its really cool and I cant think how to fault it
J

Websites and house styles

Music magazines always contain a house style. This house style is continued throughout the magazine and onto the magazines website. Q magazine is a great example of this.







The font and house style used on this fornt cover is used on every front cover. The blue, red, white and black is carried on through out the magazine.









The house style is continued through into the contents page which is a convention of most music magazines.


It is only when we come to the double page spread that the house style is not as obvious. The house style is still there but it is not as obvious as with the other two pages.

Even on the website, the red and black theme is continued. It is a generic convention of magzines to have a house style. I need to adhere to this convention and include it in my products.

The reason I included this page here is because, with my 'final'copies, one element I over-looked was the house style of my magazine and whether this was continuous throughout all my products. The changes I make need to adhere to the ideas of the house style.




Response to first draft check.

We where asked to hand in everything we had done so far on our blog for marking.
Upon the return of these grades I had a number of changes to make to both the blog and the products themselves that I found necessary to implement.

Saturday 12 March 2011

Final Double Page Spread

This is the final version of my double page spread. I manipulated the background in order to make Katy K (the model) stand out. The various type faces are good because it makes certain elements of the article stand out more. Only part of the article is on this page, in the full magazine this would be the introduction page of the story and it would continue onto another double page.